Kill The Lights - Comments

amazing. beautiful. gorgeous. everything.

you always say you don't like the chapter, but i feel you don't give yourself enough credit.
your writing is a lovely slurred poetry, you have a very particular voice.
give yourself some credit.

Awh, Tate is back.
I'm glad you updated- don't be sorry :D
This chapter was great. I'm loving the voice the chapters are starting to get.
I'm curious now, wonderin' what's going to happen next. Can't wait for an update :)

whoa what just happened?!

It was nice to see this being updated. I've missed it, and the update did not disappoint me. It's so beautiful, your writing, and I always picture every scene perfectly in my head. I love it.
I hope you'll be updating this soon.

Oh how I've missed this story. I was so excited when I got an update notification for this, and I was not disappointed! I love your imagery and all the emotion poured into it, it's just so beautiful.
"I feel like everything’s crashing down on me, suffocating and burying, only it’s slow, slow like the drag of a cigarette, like the cold morning air, like the careful stroke of a paintbrush. There’s a wall of water waiting to come in, pounding against the building, whatever building I’m in, desperate and dark. It’s seeping through the floorboards, leaking down the wallpaper, dripping from the ceiling. And it’s black, black, black like my heart."
Those lines were just perfect. I can't even explain why I liked them so much, and if I tried I probably wouldn't make too much sense.
Anyways: this chapter was beautiful, and I really hope you'll be updating again soon.

It Lives!

i've kinda missed this
a lot

oh know what happened to Deon??!? he better not have died!!! Dx

I saw the update- and got super happy.
At first, thought his 'angel' was gong to be at the door- and let out a very frustrated groan when it was just the fucking landlord! but yeah, this update was fantastic- no need to be sorry.

I cant wait to see what happens next :}}

it's perfectly fine that you don't know what to write anymore, i've done this on more than one occassion. i still enjoy the story, and completely understand.

oh how i've missed this :]
*hugs*

don't be sorryy!!!! i still love this. just write what you can. if you can't remember what your plan was, just make a new one or something (:

Yayy!! You updated! Woooooo!

THis was not at all bad. It was amazing. I loved it.
It seems just... I dunno, real I guess.
I can't wait for the next chapter.

Don't be sorry! I know how you feel, completely.
But, I loved this update.

I don’t care, I want to die, I want everything to stop.
I really liked that line, how it just stood out on it's own.

I'm so curious to see what's going to happen next.
Ug, I forgot how much I love this story.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :3

I really like this story. I love it actually.
But ur last chap was kind of confusing. Most of the time especially when it they said "fairyboy" and down I didn't know what was going on. Other than that ur brilliant and I'm subscribing

i sort of lost touch with this story, and i'm kind of glad. it built my anticipation for more to go up. (:

Why didn't Tate save Deon? Goddammit he wanted to live for a split second! But now he's just going to go back to dying again.

poor deon, going insane. sometimes it doesn't even seem like he is, but at the same time it's so easy to tell that he's not sane. i feel sorry for him.
was it even tate he saw there, or was he just imagining?
i'm not entirely sure if i understand what's going on. but i like it anyways.
xoxo.

Yeah, i figured Deon was going insane quite a few chapters ago. Poor Deon.

I wonder if he even saw Tate; i dont know, because he's seeing so much that isnt there.

But anyways, i loved this chapter. It didnt seem rushed- it was great :}
I cant wait until the next update :D