January 4th, 2015 at 08:51pm
I Was Lost, But Now You Found Me - Comments
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i love ur story keep it up updated soon plz i want to know moreSeptember 10th, 2014 at 07:24pm
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sequalMay 10th, 2013 at 10:11am
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SO GONNA MAKE THE SEQUAL ?February 14th, 2013 at 04:29am
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sorry, I haven't commented in a while,maybe the title could be............
So take your eyes off the trigger
I’m not to blame if your world turns to black
There's just no hope for our final embrace
Pay the price for your betrayal
You were told to to run away, soak the place and light the flame
Is it my turn to die?
My heart is pounding as I say goodbye
So now I dance in the flames
An evil feeling it ticks
My body shaking there’s no turning back
I love you crying and screaming my name
I was told to stay away, Those two words I can’t obey
***All those titles are actually lyrics to Your Betrayal by Bullet for my Valentine, which is my fav. song right now,=)***
Other title ideas*
Take the Fall
My Secure Fate Fades Away *or* just My Secure Fate
I Can See Through You -lyrics form Outside by Staind-
Risk the Final Falling
Couldn't hide the emptiness or let it show *lyric from Lithium by Evanescence*
Truthful Lies
Dark Secret
Legacy of my Lies
Stay Captive * title name of a song by the band still remains*
Pain Without Love *lyrics from Pain by Three Days Grace*
It's Never Too Late *Lyric from Never Too Late by Three Days Grace*
A Bottomless Soul
Save me from the Nothing I've Become *Lyrics from Bring me too life by Evanescence*
Ok, I could list millions & millions more...but I think that's enough for now,lol, hope you find one soon!June 30th, 2010 at 01:42am -
i really hope you do a sequel, this is by far one of my favorite stories on this website.
and as for a name you should call it something like "the wild ride" you know kinda throw in Michelle again and make it more suspensefull... but hey its just a suggestion lol cant wait for the sequelJune 30th, 2010 at 12:49am -
Nice update! Can't wait for more. :)June 29th, 2010 at 11:24pm
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That was a great way to end it :) you better make a sequel!June 29th, 2010 at 10:39pm
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Sequel please!!!June 29th, 2010 at 09:23pm
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omg SEQUELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEJune 29th, 2010 at 06:33pm
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SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O do eet!June 29th, 2010 at 06:04pm
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You should totally do a sequel!June 29th, 2010 at 05:54pm
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sssseeeeeeeeqqqqqqqquuuuuuuuuuuuueeeeeeelllllllll please make a sequel i need to know what happens nextJune 29th, 2010 at 05:48pm
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youneed to do a sequal1!!June 29th, 2010 at 05:33pm
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwJune 29th, 2010 at 05:21pm
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this was an amazing story please please pleaseeeeeee write a sequel to thisJune 29th, 2010 at 05:12pm
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pleeeeaaaaaasssseeeeee WRITE A SEQUELJune 29th, 2010 at 04:48pm
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This is a really great story. It was funny. It made me cry a little too.
rest in peace jimmy sullivan aka the revJune 29th, 2010 at 04:47pm -
p.s......please write a sequelJune 29th, 2010 at 04:29pm
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hey your stories are awesome :) I'm writing my own but need ideas and it's not that good
http://stories.mibba.com/read/270091/A-hybrid-Deceiving-and-dangerous/June 29th, 2010 at 04:29pm
When I started reading I couldn't stop, it was THAT good XD