This was very cute and very typical of something a girl [like me ;)] may do. Very nice introduction and well-written. Hope you update soon :D I would love to see more from this story.
You know what's really amazing about this. It's very normal, something anybody on this site might go in a store and do [girl wise I mean]. I think that's why I enjoyed reading this.
Aww it's cute! I like it! Very nice; the length just made it perfect. I think it would have ruined if you'd made it longer. But yeah, I thought it was sweet. Great job! :)
February 1st, 2010 at 01:30pm
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