Wires. - Comments

This was fukking awesome. I loved how you represented veins as mauve laces, it really got me like 'whoa, how come haven't I thought of this'. c:

n'aaw this is so nice :) i think your awesome lovey :)

This was a great story. It was so sad, but the way you wrote it made it kind of alluring, lol. I can only imagine her future, which might not be as alluring. Awesome job.

Whoa!
This is amazing (:
Love it <3

That was beautiful.

One Shot For One Shot.

I have nothing bad to say about this story. It was absolutely brilliant, her emotion and desire was so real and I loved the imagery. The name of the drug dealer was short and simple, and I liked that. The story also made me wonder about his past and more about her past. Your descriptions were simple and the story was very straight-forward, no hesitation, just taking action. Your writing astounds me and I can honestly say that you are one of my favorite authors on this site. Good job.
:D

This was awesome, I love it. <333 I agree with Lee-Ev, I felt sad for her and was unsure whether to like Gus or not. But it was brilliantly written lovie. (:

I LOVED IT:)

Aw, I really liked it! I felt sad for her; she wanted to be with the stars so badly. I couldn't figure out if I liked Gus or not, but overall, this was very, very good.

Good job!