I'm Begging You to Be My Escape - Comments

Oh my goddd. You have to write a sequel!

WOW! I never saw any of that coming! :O
But awwwwweeee! James and Evan and their babies! AWWE! That was toooooo cute! <3
Oh I agree with what MusicLoveUntamed said, make in James POV for your epilogue :)

An epilogue would be amazing, as long as it's not too cutesy and cliche. :D

If you choose to do an epilogue you should do it James' POV.

I think an epilogue would be awesome :)
I'm sad this is ended though, but at least Evan and James are happy now :)

Loved it!

;o epilogue, please. :)
i love this story. :D
definitely third person, try something a little different. ;D

Whatever you do, I'm sure it will be great =). I really like the ability you have to describe his feelings and how you make the reader feel like the main character <3

i just gotta say... i loved this story, like seriously. it was funny, cute, sad, upsetting, happy and suspensful in the most delightful and skilled way. I mean, you are possibly my favorite author on Mibba (who I don't talk to and therefore, I can't be biased about your writing)
:)
i'm sad to see it end so... i want an epilogue. #justsaying
=D

-kayt

This is such a beautifully amazing story. I'm pretty much speechless at the moment with wonder and joy. I don't think it needs an epilogue. I think the ending is perfect just the way it is and doesn't need anything more. I can't tell you how much I loved reading this and how much I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep on writing! <3

his mum is evil. i dont want you to finish this story its so good. if you have to make sure you write a sequel several years on or something i dont want this to stop!

Aw, I'm sad to see it end. Yes, you should do an epilogue! I think it should be a few years down the line where they have some kids or are married or something.

Noooooo!!! That bitch of a mother. How could she? Oh poor baby. Plz hurry and update as I am fighting my tears as well!

I can't believe his mom was like that!
Poor Evan! D:
But, he's got James to comfort him! :D
So that's good!
I don't think James'll care about how much money either.

Update Love Update Love It .

His mom's a whore. And not in the actual term. In the insulting term.

And holycow/ I'd be mad if someone made that sorta charged...I wouldna been a hobo at the airport then spend all that monet no matter how much I wanted to go home.

like the chapter even though it was kinda sad...but but happy that he gets 2 go bac 2 James

Aww... I'm suprised I didnt cry...
Very good job on Chapters 20 and 21...
Can't wait for more.

Sad.

his mom sucks ball sacks

awww, i knew that was gonna happen but i hoped that i was wrong, but at least now the two of them will be together :D