WOW! I never saw any of that coming! :O But awwwwweeee! James and Evan and their babies! AWWE! That was toooooo cute! <3 Oh I agree with what MusicLoveUntamed said, make in James POV for your epilogue :)
Whatever you do, I'm sure it will be great =). I really like the ability you have to describe his feelings and how you make the reader feel like the main character <3
i just gotta say... i loved this story, like seriously. it was funny, cute, sad, upsetting, happy and suspensful in the most delightful and skilled way. I mean, you are possibly my favorite author on Mibba (who I don't talk to and therefore, I can't be biased about your writing) :) i'm sad to see it end so... i want an epilogue. #justsaying =D
This is such a beautifully amazing story. I'm pretty much speechless at the moment with wonder and joy. I don't think it needs an epilogue. I think the ending is perfect just the way it is and doesn't need anything more. I can't tell you how much I loved reading this and how much I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep on writing! <3
his mum is evil. i dont want you to finish this story its so good. if you have to make sure you write a sequel several years on or something i dont want this to stop!
Aw, I'm sad to see it end. Yes, you should do an epilogue! I think it should be a few years down the line where they have some kids or are married or something.
I can't believe his mom was like that! Poor Evan! D: But, he's got James to comfort him! :D So that's good! I don't think James'll care about how much money either.
His mom's a whore. And not in the actual term. In the insulting term.
And holycow/ I'd be mad if someone made that sorta charged...I wouldna been a hobo at the airport then spend all that monet no matter how much I wanted to go home.