Aw, this was such a nice story. You did a wondeful job at incorporating your photo into the novel. I was so surprised in the end when it said her parents died but it did lead to a nice ending to where the aunt explained why she got the shoes. It was a very lovely story that you wrote. Just a few minor spelling mistakes that I noted were: “We all knew of out financial problems.” – I believe it should say "our"? And, “It wasn’t very had because we didn’t have much to pack.” – did you mean, "hard". Anyways, this was great...I love flee markets! =D
February 2nd, 2010 at 06:53pm
