With Crystal Eyes - Comments

oh my god this is so asjkdfhalskdjhfrawklehfnabxc
I'm so glad I found this.

Your writing has gotten so much better, and I really, truly mean that. I will forever love And I'll Reach My Destiny and Life Changes, but this is such a more raw, talented, amazing side of your writing and I hope this is what you take with you when you grow up. You're going to go places, believe me. It's crazy the talent that you have.

Love, this is simply astounding. You have so much talent and I don't think you could possibly realise how much.Your writing style is so captivating; it makes me want to read and then read and then cry some.

Personally I think this should stick as a one-shot, it leaves at the perfect place. However-- it has qualities that would make it a great chaptered piece too. I basically think its your call. :)

This is one of my favourite pieces of writing, ever, on this site.
I could feel the emotion. It was beautiful.

I say yes to posting, you don't have much a say now, Love.
Well you do, but I like to pretend you don't.
I think it sounds neat, so yeah. I think so!
&& ofc. I was not directed here after stalking your profile.
Don't even think that ;) I went to rehab. I'm clean ;D

And yes, I meant to say trucking.

ZOMG THIS SOUNDS AMAZING AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT.
I HAD TO READ THE SUMMARY AT LEAST TWICE JUST SO I COULD UNDERSTAND IT.
Although if I wasn't thinking about Ellen on Idol I probs. would've understood it the first time.

I can't wait to read this; sounds trucking awesome.

OKAY SO THIS IS GORGEOUS, NO LIE.