Unmade Beds - Comments

Wow… this is really hard hitting.
I love the way you’ve written it
The repetition of her name is just eye-catching to say the least.

The way you’ve made this story so dramatic just makes me go
You shouldn’t doubt your writing Char-bear because in all honesty, it’s amazing.

Woah.

This was really different. I feel like I always say that, but this is really, really... different. Like, I never would have thought of anything like this. It makes me wonder a lot, though; about what's realli going on, if that makes sense?

I really liked this, yknow. It was really well-written &was just really intruiging. I'm sort of sorry it was so short.

Charlotte!

That was amaaaaaaaaazing. It was hardly anything like mine, really. Just the basic bed/desk comparison, but it was completely your own after that.

I loved it! You're a really good writer when you make the effort. Layout was awesome too.