Caught in a Fantasy - Comments

I'm not a big fan of twilight for obvious reasons, but this is quite the amazing fan-fiction!

Loved it <3
More soon i hope :-*

i love it can't wait for you to update!!

Love Jasper but sometimes he's a dumdum. Can't wait for more :)

OMG yes! Love it! I wish Jasper would speak to her :p

Can't wait for more :)

I love the story so far and i love how long the chapters are! I cant wait for the next chapter! But i do hope that Chris's view will be in the next one cuz i really want to see what happens to her!

Aw :) I love it :) Can't wait for more :)

I must say, It's better then Twlight (That's a really good compliment cause I don't like Twlight that much!) haha, Update soon!<3

I love it!! Update soon!! :)

Backness! Okay, on chapter 2, you forgot to undo bold! Well, you did "[/b", but you forgot the other "]"!!! Aaand... the paragraph thing should be done, too! I saw a few grammar errors, and if you wanted to PM me the chapters before they come out so I can fix them, that'd be cool! I could do whatever to them, send them back, and then you could copy and paste! All right, update soon!
P.S. I thought it fair that since you commented on mine, I'd comment on yours!

It's good so far, and I'm only on chapter 1, but I have some advice: For one, you didn't end your italics when it seems like they should've been ended! Fix this, please! :) Aaaand... if you wouldn't mind, beginning a new paragraph whenever a new person begins speaking will also make this easier to read!!! It also makes your chapters seem longer, so ++++!!!! There you go! Okay, back to read stuff!!!

updateeeeee!!!!!!

don't end it. it's good <3

Thank you, I'll try - but my I'm having issues with my computer.

Haha, I Stole your comment virginity!! XD I Love this story, please Update?!?! XD