Wow... I really loved this story. Definitely different and unique. At some points I was lost, but once I read it through I got the hang of it. Very nicely written with just a few grammar mistakes. I wish the story flowed a little better, though. But I guess it was the style you were going for. And it's a different technique, so I guess that's what makes it so unique! (RHYMING! BROWNIE POINTS! Sorry... XD) Love the plotline. And I loved the descriptions of her outside for the first time. Captivating. <3 THank you so much for your entry! And good luck! =D
Wow... I really loved this story. Definitely different and unique. At some points I was lost, but once I read it through I got the hang of it. Very nicely written with just a few grammar mistakes. I wish the story flowed a little better, though. But I guess it was the style you were going for. And it's a different technique, so I guess that's what makes it so unique! (RHYMING! BROWNIE POINTS! Sorry... XD)
Love the plotline. And I loved the descriptions of her outside for the first time. Captivating. <3
THank you so much for your entry! And good luck! =D