Dark Secrets - Comments

The icons that are on the summery page are a little creepy and give the story a scary sort of feeling to it.

Like cho-nee-dono said, this did have a dark side to it, which was something that I haven’t read a lot here at Mibba. I loved how you stuck with the modern vampire instead of twisting it to something that it is not. Modern vampires are always the best ones.

Everything was described in a way that the scene just flowed into my mind.

“Goodbye Mr. Chase Andrew Fox.” I said with a vicious smirk.
For some reason, this was my favorite line. I don’t know why though…

This whole one-shot was marvelously written! I loved it!

Your writing style is very nice, smooth to read and well punctuated. I also really liked the fact that you played up the dark, sadistic side of vampires that some people seem to like to ignore. The sex was well written and bold, I liked that part. There are a few sections that I feel you could have elaborated on, but for the most part I feel like you did an excellent job and chose a good topic.

Mmm! Well done! So dark and sadistic! It's a quality you don't find with many modern vampires. I did so enjoy it! (random fact: the fact that it was exactly 1000 words amused me for some reason). It was well-written and it was intriguing. An enjoyable read.