A Ghost Behind the Piano - Comments

You should totally make your own layout to add character to this.
Really amazing. The little things you said that sparked the mind and the imagination.
"The times you don’t want to wake up; ‘Cause in your sleep it’s never over when you give up; The sun is always gonna rise up; You need to wake up; Got to keep your head up."
=Beautiful<3

I love this, I was about to cry.
It was sad, but amazing.

I loved it! I would have liked to know what happened to her though. The whole time I wondered how she died but it was still really good! =)

"She was beautiful, inside and out. She could light up a room as soon as she stepped through the door. But now the door was closed" I LOVE this. And the story! Well done!

Okay I think it is a great story! But... the lay out kinda threw me off, you should think of make a better one or using a pre-made. And I didn't know until the end that Lexi was a ghost you might want to add that when she first see's/talks to her. But other then those two things it was great!

i liked this story alot it was short but good
you need to fix the italic [ /i] is how it should go without the space between [ /
in case you didn't know
also i don't know if i missed it but
i would've liked to know what happened to lexi
otherwise i thought it was very good