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The best?
Wow... thank you. <3

That... was the best one-shot I've ever read.

Aww, thank you so much.
I'm glad you liked it.

Hollyyyy Crapppp.
This is the first one-shot I've read and I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED it.

Hot, yes. ;) Lmao.

But really. You've got quite the talent. The last line made me smile and so did the "but not nearly as fun as it was being a devil." Mannnn.

You're awesome.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

There's just something about Billie as Fink and Mike as Van Gough that makes the two even more adorable together. Amazing one shot!

I think you got it right the first time, Joan.
Thanks for liking it though.

GAH!

MOLTO BENE (or is it MOLTE BENE? I don't know. Never took Italian)

Wonderful and sexy and quite unexpected at the end, there.

One Shot For One Shot:

Ok, so I'm not much of a Green Day fan, nor a fan of slash but this piece wasn't bad xD
I thought it started out a bit slow and there were a few sections that confused me (the wording I mean, your story made sense) I also felt like you had a few tense issues going on the first few paragraphs (I couldn't tell if it was supposed to be past or present)...the last line was great though, I loved it - funny, cute - sounded like something one of my horny male charcters (or hell, myself) would say. Good job!

The plot was amazing and the whole smut scene was great. (: You did an excellent job of writing it and capturing Billie. :3
But, in the flashback, like, at the beginning, you had quite a few small grammar errors. If you just reread that and revise it, you'll have the perfect smutty oneshot. (:
<3

hehe aww, I'm glad you gave it a shot then. =]

I loved this.
To be honest I'm not always into slash but this was just yummeh.
You're an amazing writer.
<3

hehe awls, thanks Foxy. *hug*
If I didn't put detail into it this would've been a drabble. XD

"He ran his thumb over one of the holes they cut out so he could see and he couldn’t wipe the grin off his face."

I don't know why I adored this line. :3 It just made me smile really big. XD
It's amazing. I've obviously read some of your stuff, but I barely realized how great of a writer you are.
I love the fine detail you place and the warm tone you used throughout the whole thing.
:D Great job, Ash! ;3

@ Bobbye. I figured if Fink and Van got some love Bike deserved it too. XDD

tehe aww, thanks Carrie. *hug*
That whole line is why I wrote this one-shot actually. It popped in my head one day and wouldn't leave me alone.

Tehe, the end made it for me. That last paragraph. xD Yes. I approve.

I loved this. It was so hot and...just amazing.

Sure being a reverend was fun but not nearly as fun as it was being a devil.

I loved this line. It really stuck out to me. You could probably write an entire novel based on this line, and that's what makes it so cool. And the way it works in this story, Billie fooling around with Mike in their Network costumes, is really unique.

So yeah, fucking awesome. :3

I rewrote it a few times and just couldn't think of anything better XD
I take centuries to write smut.
but I'm glad you like it as a whole. *hug*

Hehe. You know what I thought of the story the first time around. Though I gotta say...the last line doesnt quite work for me. It's clever but something about just...I don't know. But on the whole, me likey.

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