Take Me on the Floor - Comments

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude

Loved that story. I can't wait for the next update!!! :)

<3

loveers itt(;
love youu!

Me gusta, dearest. That was a very wonderful chapter :)

-kayt

must admit, i am a little confuzzled. guess i just have to read it a second time. stupid brain at midnight thirty.
anywho, what i did get i loved. (= as usual
keep up the dirty work =p lovers youu baby <3

:notsureifgusta: I like it! :)

Oh my gersh. :) Me gusta, mi - uhhh- perro.

-kayt

New Fan! - I love how intensely you write. I have to say as a gay guy, I found the sex kind of... hot to be honest, I think being written in first person helped me get past that. The tension and drama building is also well written. You hooked me and have given me a story I can, forgive the pun, sink my teeth into, I want and need more. Over all very little things bugged me or I felt needed changing. Maybe nothing at all to be honest as the things that might have felt out of place seem to work better with the themes and characters. You have a good writing style and describe everything which makes it easier to imagine the world and the characters. I hope there is more twists and turns and, shamelessly, sex to come. Looking forward to finding out where you take the story.

22 please :/

Gahhhhh i called him already? Right?! Wheewww baby (;

Haaha i knew she wass someone important!
Update now missy =p

What did they do?

awesome job baby

TYANNE MICHELLE MORRIS, GET YOUR LITTLE FINGERS TO YOUR STUPID COMPUTER KEYS AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!

-kayt

Duuude, seriously? Not. Cool.
You need to update this right now. Like, now, right now!
I can't even.
What's going ooooooooon?
Y U KEEP SECRETS FROM ME?!?!?!

-kayt

Well, that was unexpected!!! Hope the Queen doesn't shout 'off with their heads!' and shit! Update again, soon, yeah?

Whoaaa!!! That was way heated;D
Loved it!
So, Thorn now, eh?
*sigh*
I saw it coming!!
Update again soon,
or else (dun dun dun!!)

Yummy(:<

gahh
i dont think i could get enough of him!
seriously, he could take advantage of me anytime.
<3

and again, and again, and again
yupp.