No Girl Deserves To Hear This - Comments

  • lavender eyes;

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    I think I saw a Youtube video with this story once. Did you publish a video version of this as well? By the way, the story is very good!
    April 29th, 2011 at 12:13am
  • showstopper95

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    Its a great one shot.
    Love how its written. :)
    June 10th, 2010 at 08:35pm
  • Jack.Barakatt

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    Well,, I can't say anything but the fact that that was better than the Vampire Diaries (which is a fail book by a famous author)
    May 31st, 2010 at 08:22pm
  • Touch.Me.Not

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    that was sooo sad...Dx but u wrote it so nicely,and I can't wait for more
    April 13th, 2010 at 11:20am
  • SynclareB

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    OMG i cried....lol that was really great
    you should do some more
    February 26th, 2010 at 12:46pm
  • reader_lover09

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    Great:)
    February 5th, 2010 at 05:12am
  • livlaufluv6275

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    Oh that gave me sum memories ;( luckily not to death extreme just... mental extreme xD
    I'll explain in a message but it has to do with the guy i like lol
    ANYWAYYY!! I really really liked it :3 im big on stuff like this (sad stories...lol) But I thought it was very good :) i like the "play-setup" (ie. when they talked it was like a script) i haven't written or read a story like that for sooo long!!!! :D happy memories!!!
    Lol well i thought it was definitely very good :)

    ~Mikayla~
    February 5th, 2010 at 12:30am