17 and Pregnant. - Comments

  • choirgirlx3

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    Not gonna lie that was a little depressing :/
    May 26th, 2011 at 01:40am
  • choirgirlx3

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    splendorous chapter! more soon? *gives puppy dog eyes*
    March 5th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • iVooDooedBuddah

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    I haven't read it all yet;
    but i love this so far!
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    Hope you continue soon!
    March 4th, 2010 at 12:28am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    ps, banner should be by the end of the week. Hope that's okay
    March 3rd, 2010 at 08:32pm
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Well, I had to read the presequel as well, but anyho.
    From chapter one, I liked how you stuck just to the border, because sometimes detail gets annoying. And you gave an insight to how they did meet for the first time, and everything like that.
    The pace you're moving at is steady and not too slow and not too fast. Which is great.
    And you tackled the school issue too. How they had to tell their head teacher, and everything like that. And how they're trying to keep it to themselves, which most people would do. And how her bestfriend had stuck with her is great, showing how true friends are.
    Overall, this story is going along well, steady-paced and basic.
    Well done.
    March 3rd, 2010 at 08:32pm
  • alaskapup2

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    when will it start???
    February 5th, 2010 at 12:52am