17 and Pregnant. - Comments

Not gonna lie that was a little depressing :/

splendorous chapter! more soon? *gives puppy dog eyes*

I haven't read it all yet;
but i love this so far!
c:
Hope you continue soon!

ps, banner should be by the end of the week. Hope that's okay

Well, I had to read the presequel as well, but anyho.
From chapter one, I liked how you stuck just to the border, because sometimes detail gets annoying. And you gave an insight to how they did meet for the first time, and everything like that.
The pace you're moving at is steady and not too slow and not too fast. Which is great.
And you tackled the school issue too. How they had to tell their head teacher, and everything like that. And how they're trying to keep it to themselves, which most people would do. And how her bestfriend had stuck with her is great, showing how true friends are.
Overall, this story is going along well, steady-paced and basic.
Well done.

when will it start???