A World That Never Was - Comments

this is good :) i hope u continue with it

OMFG you Biscuit Eating Bulldog! You didn't send me the chapter and I had to read it here!
Sad Face... Whatever... Tis cool babe... Still loving it and still wanting to play for total freakin' reals!! haha xD
I can't wait for the next chapter!

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I see that you took my advice, nice work.^-^ It's much more easier to read now. Aww, their trial ended.:/ Haha, all his friends want to play now. I'd want to play too!:D Hmmm, I wonder why Eddie's the only one having the weird Chasm problems.o:

I'm loving it!
I'm glad I finally had that chance to read it..since you don't send the chapters to my email anymore..
Anywhooo! Lol I can't believe Natasha saved his ass again!

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Lol Eddie reminds me a lot of Inuyasha.XD Lol love it, Eddie's humor amuses me. And Natasha keeps saving his ass.XD And she seems nice in her own way. Can't wait to read more!

Lol I said wth too when I read that he was bald.XD Hahahahaha, awwww, lol he was still bald in the game!XDD

Wow, Chasm sounds really cool. I'd totally play!:D I'd totally prefer to have cat like features lol I'm not exactly a gamer but, it sounds awesome so far, as well as pretty scary.And Natasha sounds cool.o:

I enjoy the length of your chapters, but if you feel that it's too thick, I'd suggest putting more spaces between your paragraphs for those readers that like to read faster.-_-

Omg, I'd like to check out your drawings.:) Your lucky enough to have that talent. I've been wanting my characters to be drawn. I've had an offer, but, he never did since he was always too busy to. Everyone is.-_-; Anyway, I enjoyed Eddie's humor, and I felt bad that for him when he got his ass kicked twice.><; The sentence that mentioned how he used to be skin and bones reminds me of my ex.:/

Oh, lol and it was funny to read it while reading my own name.XD

So far, I like it. You have great detail and I enjoyed your writing style. I plan to keep reading and subscribing. Do you still update?

I still love this story!! xD

OMG!!! You posted the story!!! Yay!!