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Trig-ger (100)

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its amazing

August 5th, 2010 at 12:42am
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it's a great storyline, but your lack of punctuation after speech, not seperating it from the main paragraph and your misplacement of commas make it difficult to read.
(you also misspelt Spencer-it's Spender near the top of c2)
i really like it though and i'd like to read more :)

July 2nd, 2010 at 09:38am
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Aww. Now that's just plain adorable.

July 2nd, 2010 at 07:53am
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Stupid Greyback. More soon please!

June 28th, 2010 at 12:43am
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<3<3

June 25th, 2010 at 05:19am
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I can't believe that you don't have more comments here! It's an awesome story.

June 25th, 2010 at 04:36am
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I love you it! I'm in love with this story. i cant wait till you update :)

June 19th, 2010 at 07:21pm
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This one of the best HP stories I've read, honestly. :D

March 26th, 2010 at 01:52pm
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=O
WHY THANKIES!
haha
<3 I'll trys and update sooooon (:
I haz writers block D=

February 9th, 2010 at 08:36am
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This is super interesting. (: I found myself wanting to read more, Shan, your plots are always awesome. xD

February 9th, 2010 at 01:12am

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