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  • Trig-ger

    Trig-ger (100)

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    its amazing
    August 5th, 2010 at 12:42am
  • hello love.

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    it's a great storyline, but your lack of punctuation after speech, not seperating it from the main paragraph and your misplacement of commas make it difficult to read.
    (you also misspelt Spencer-it's Spender near the top of c2)
    i really like it though and i'd like to read more :)
    July 2nd, 2010 at 09:38am
  • Shadowday

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    Aww. Now that's just plain adorable.
    July 2nd, 2010 at 07:53am
  • Shadowday

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    Stupid Greyback. More soon please!
    June 28th, 2010 at 12:43am
  • Gryffindork -_-

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    <3<3
    June 25th, 2010 at 05:19am
  • Shadowday

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    I can't believe that you don't have more comments here! It's an awesome story.
    June 25th, 2010 at 04:36am
  • Tanyaxox

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    I love you it! I'm in love with this story. i cant wait till you update :)
    June 19th, 2010 at 07:21pm
  • solita

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    This one of the best HP stories I've read, honestly. :D
    March 26th, 2010 at 01:52pm
  • TragicMistake.

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    =O
    WHY THANKIES!
    haha
    <3 I'll trys and update sooooon (:
    I haz writers block D=
    February 9th, 2010 at 08:36am
  • Childhood;;

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    This is super interesting. (: I found myself wanting to read more, Shan, your plots are always awesome. xD
    February 9th, 2010 at 01:12am
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