Hey :) Just had to comment to say I'm really enjoying Redemption - please continue to write! It's very well written and really effectively inspires sadness for the way the characters have to live. I love your use of descriptive language - especially the description of Jamshed. Great final lines of Chapter Two - "you'll live...for now." I'm curious to know what happens next... :)
February 16th, 2010 at 02:46pm