My God - Comments

I sort of began to hyperventilate when I read this. I can’t even begin to describe how fabulously amazing and wonderful it was. It hit so close to home and made me think of everything that I myself and so many others have wondered over. I love how you wrote it with the first person point of view, talking about the girl. I can’t even…gah. I can’t even begin to describe how much I enjoyed this, even if I particularly don’t like questions it has brought to the surface once more. I adored your details and the emotion behind it, and I am utterly stunned.

<3 Haven

I agree with the first person that commented.. All we have to do is pray with our hearts to God and if it is in His will He will give it to us

This was really, yeah, I loved it.

Definitly showed what I think many of us wonder sometimes.

Magnificently written.

I like how it's written. Are you going to write more?

This is really good. I think it grapples with the classic question, "If there is a God who loves us, then why do bad things happen?"

To which, the answer is, of course, 'God gave us free-will.'

You've taken a widely known concept and turned it into a short, eloquent one-shot. It was easy to read and very well written, and there were only a couple grammar mistakes, but it was easy to over look them because it was simply that good.