Take Yourself To Higher Places. - Comments

i am addicted to your writing. it's official haha

Congratulations, your contest entry made third place(: I loved your story. It was really amazing! :)

I am having a confused a la palooza. The idea was good, even inspiring. The writing needed a very little editing but that wasn't what confused me, confusing sentence structure is easily decoded, the confusing thing was the story set up. I went int ehre knowing nothing about the story and I was reading and there is no sense of passing time. I seemed for a little that she was in loved with this perfect man who was a gentleman who would treat her right who beat her. Confused a la palooza. Then towards the end I shifted my thinking and went hey what if time is passing? Read it again. So the idea was good, the way it was presented, a tad confusing.
That's your Christmas with effort. Hoped it helped or you enjoyed it or somthing along those lines!

Gasp :O this is amazing.
It has lots of emotions and its well-written, with lovely grammar and word use.
I adore this story :) and my descriptions suck, sorry >.< but I really love this!

I agree with the person above, you did really well expressing your emotion through your words.
This is one of the first stories that I've read that was in this style, but I like it, it's interesting. More like you are sitting having a meaningful conversation with the author.
It's a really good story, nice storyline and definitely good grammar and spelling and all.

Amazing ^^

You could really see the emotion behind the word you wrote
and i think you did an incredible job of combining the paragraph and stanza's