Homepage › Stories › Out Of The Chair: Spock/Kirk › Comments

Out Of The Chair: Spock/Kirk - Comments

  • QuietSports

    QuietSports (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    I do wish you would post more however :)
    July 9th, 2013 at 01:17am
  • QuietSports

    QuietSports (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    This is a very interesting story. My only suggestions are slowing down a bit. It takes me a moment to figure out there is a change in location and such, and then I end up rereading. Also, Spock does not say things like I'm or don't. Conjunctions I believe they are called. I have noticed that Vulcans do not use them, even Spock does not.
    July 9th, 2013 at 01:17am
  • Lady D

    Lady D (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Australia
    Ohhh I like it!
    May 26th, 2010 at 11:16am
  • our avenged tania.

    our avenged tania. (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Canada
    I feel like I should hug you for writing this! I love your writing!
    February 17th, 2010 at 12:39am
Homepage › Stories › Out Of The Chair: Spock/Kirk › Comments