Loving You Is Dangerous - Comments

I love it!!! It's sooo effing rad! Hey hey hey, wen u sell it i'll be ur first buyer. Add more chapters please! I wanna keep reading

awww., jay you have to keep going, I need an update soon
your story is so good!!!, and really really hot.... XP (vampire obbsesion)
any way cant wait for more. byebye!
XP Trevor O.o

Haha. Nice chapter! :]

xoxox Adalia

Well done, I love this! XX

GAH
I
LOVE
THIS
STORY
ITS
SOOOOOOOOOOOO
GOOD
:P
...Cassie...

*new reader* good story so far please write more!

Yah, Jayke, this is brillliant!
I love it...you use amazing words to describe, y'know?
I love vampires

Great chapter! I love it !XX

OMG, I FUCKING LOVE THIS, plz keep going with it ok,
dont stop ever just keep going lol... sorry sad fact Im
in love with vampire's and Zombies but vampires
*Woooo* *hugs*

amazing! i'm really enjoying it!

i loved ur story it's really different update soon plz!

-gasp!-

More as soon as you can! :]

xoxox Adalia

it was really good(:
you put a lot of detail into it.
more soon?

xxErica

Hey
It's quite good.
I can guess whats going to happen next though.
Still it was a good idea not to start with a clich'e.
Anyway I just thought you'd like a comment that didn't
immediately declare it's undying love for your story.

thank you... i am still working on the first chapter and it should be up on tuesday or thursday

kewl

More pweez?

Soon? =]

srry, srry "locker"

sounds good.
When it said, it starts in a locker, it reminded me of Frankie<3 getting out of the licker on the "Im not ok" video

ommggg jaayyykkeee MORE!
I LOVELOVELOVE IT =D