Oli Sykes, You're Such A Tease - Comments

OMFG SO HOT

This was hot omg... great job!!!!

After reading this I have to say I worship you!! *bows* You are awesome!! xD

My word that was hot! XD
Loved it!

*claps* :D haha.
That was fricken sexy ;)
I'm agreeing with the other comments & saying I loved the accent too xD
You're really good at writing that stuff! Nice workkkk <3

I completely love you for writing that amazingness. x)

Mfft, that was hot.
Haha, but really.
I really did like that.
Actually, loved that!!
Well done!! XLD>

the accents were amazing. :)
& my god that was hot.

....freaking hooot!

Oh geez. @.@

That accent keeps running through my head! D:

Lol. Great.
I love the way they talk :)

That was really amazing. I loved it. You're very talented ;D
Only comment... the accent was lacking ;3
Like the word 'want' would be 'wan'' kinda thing. I'm from Sheffield so I know what I'm on about. (:

Ahhh! The entire time through i was plagued witha very thick, very deep SCOTISH accent running through my head. Ugh.

The story was amazing, especialy the sex!
I have a huge thing for incest but other than two couples this is the only one ive read.
This is also the second oli story ive read and they where both mostly sex... but it was amazingly written and i will probably read it again at some point. ;)
Ive written a few incest stories and i know its harder than regular relationships because you have to incorperate that bond that comes with any family, especialy two brothers or sisters.

It was truely wonderful! Keep up the good work!

Damn. One of the best i've read. And i've read a lot! x] You're one good writer :)

Oh it was beeter than good it was amzaing.
It made me giggle and blush XD I really like your writing and this was really cute <3

Oh this makes my heart burst into smiles and I can;t wait for the next chapter.
But yeah, it's just very interesting and I know it says it's a two shot and its for a contest but you should write a full story.....
Or not but I just wanted to offer cause I'm annoying like that buuut <3

ahahaaa. wahooo this is awesome! you got the accent like spot on x)
a very good mate of mine lives in west yourkshire.. and h speaks just like this ^_^
soo.. if you don't exactly know how to write the accent, i could help you :) just ask.
but i <3 this :)

SOOO,
I love you for writing this.
*subscribes*