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  • YouMeAtATL

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    OMFG SO HOT
    May 20th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • wowfairy13

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    This was hot omg... great job!!!!
    April 29th, 2013 at 05:38am
  • DetachedW0lf

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    After reading this I have to say I worship you!! *bows* You are awesome!! xD
    July 14th, 2010 at 08:02am
  • honeyjoons

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    My word that was hot! XD
    Loved it!
    May 19th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • ry-ro-rox-my-sox

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    *claps* :D haha.
    That was fricken sexy ;)
    I'm agreeing with the other comments & saying I loved the accent too xD
    You're really good at writing that stuff! Nice workkkk <3
    April 16th, 2010 at 04:16pm
  • animal soup

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    I completely love you for writing that amazingness. x)
    April 4th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    Mfft, that was hot.
    Haha, but really.
    I really did like that.
    Actually, loved that!!
    Well done!! XLD>
    April 2nd, 2010 at 08:58pm
  • livingfortheweekend.

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    the accents were amazing. :)
    & my god that was hot.
    March 28th, 2010 at 12:37am
  • Reanimate

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    ....freaking hooot!

    Oh geez. @.@

    That accent keeps running through my head! D:
    March 10th, 2010 at 05:19am
  • Natka

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    Lol. Great.
    I love the way they talk :)
    March 4th, 2010 at 09:09am
  • Diiamondz

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    That was really amazing. I loved it. You're very talented ;D
    Only comment... the accent was lacking ;3
    Like the word 'want' would be 'wan'' kinda thing. I'm from Sheffield so I know what I'm on about. (:
    February 25th, 2010 at 09:05pm
  • Macy Emalia

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    Ahhh! The entire time through i was plagued witha very thick, very deep SCOTISH accent running through my head. Ugh.

    The story was amazing, especialy the sex!
    I have a huge thing for incest but other than two couples this is the only one ive read.
    This is also the second oli story ive read and they where both mostly sex... but it was amazingly written and i will probably read it again at some point. ;)
    Ive written a few incest stories and i know its harder than regular relationships because you have to incorperate that bond that comes with any family, especialy two brothers or sisters.

    It was truely wonderful! Keep up the good work!
    February 25th, 2010 at 05:23am
  • SimplyStephanie

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    Damn. One of the best i've read. And i've read a lot! x] You're one good writer :)
    February 19th, 2010 at 07:28am
  • Naked_Zombie

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    Oh it was beeter than good it was amzaing.
    It made me giggle and blush XD I really like your writing and this was really cute <3
    February 14th, 2010 at 10:11am
  • Naked_Zombie

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    Oh this makes my heart burst into smiles and I can;t wait for the next chapter.
    But yeah, it's just very interesting and I know it says it's a two shot and its for a contest but you should write a full story.....
    Or not but I just wanted to offer cause I'm annoying like that buuut <3
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • HookedOnVengeance.

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    ahahaaa. wahooo this is awesome! you got the accent like spot on x)
    a very good mate of mine lives in west yourkshire.. and h speaks just like this ^_^
    soo.. if you don't exactly know how to write the accent, i could help you :) just ask.
    but i <3 this :)
    February 7th, 2010 at 03:46pm
  • wholock

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    SOOO,
    I love you for writing this.
    *subscribes*
    February 7th, 2010 at 07:57am
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