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BlackRosesBleedBlack
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I really don't understand it.. It's good and it seems to me like you could turn it into a story if you wanted to =D
May 14th, 2010 at 03:29am
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Wow. This is really good. You're a really good writer. Amazing one shot.
April 20th, 2010 at 11:00pm
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I love this Chan!
I love your descriptions, and the dialogue.
A suggestion would be to put what it's about in the summary, because it took me a second to figure out what this was about.
Great one shot!
February 7th, 2010 at 04:35am
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