Update sorry I didn't read it in a while. Computer problems didn't allow me to know which stories I was readinh at some time! But Update love where this story is going!!
Wow. I really like this story. It's very real. Her relationship with her mother is much like the one I have with mine, which makes it easy to relate to and little things like how she throws things in the trash can instead of dropping them are very real and give her a lot of personality. Your story is very good. A bit more detail in certain areas and some things are worded awkwardly, but otherwise it's amazing. (Also this is the longest comment I have ever written on Mibba)