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  • just-a-lie

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    aww that was so romantic. So heartfelt.
    I really dont want this story to come to and end.
    Awesome updates!!
    xoxox
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:47am
  • Cassie Ainsworth.

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    Mehhh! Only 5 chapters left!? ='[

    This was a tearful chapter. I swear, I almost cried.
    It can't end so soon. Ahh! I hope you update soon.

    -cries-
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:46am
  • Angelus.

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    WHAT?? how can it end so soon?? it's bearly started! ok... so it has... but... shut up dammit.
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:45am
  • Oscar Wilde

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    I can't believe it's ending!!! *screams*
    I kind of saw if coming as they started falling in love all over again...
    I reckon it will be a happy ending!
    well, i hope so at least...
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:44am
  • Geeword

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    “Come home with me tonight,” he whispered against her lips, his fingertips grazing her exposed skin. That was just OMG !! Man that was just so romantic. I can't begin to tell you how sad I'm gonna be when this story comes to an end =( Thanks for the update =D
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:35am
  • Sugartrout

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    Oh I get it!!! xD You're planning on making thousand sequals always enging sadly.. :'( *sobs* That was a bit pointless.. but heyh.. :D
    God!!! I love your Gerard-character.. he's so manly and sweet and funny. yummy. What's wrong with me today?!?!! :'D
    And a little suggestion: if/when they go Gee's place and do their erm.. thing, make it slow and eh, intense that way. Usually their love-scenes have been so rushed/passionate, so little change would do good! ;) and I'm not saying those uber-passionate let's rip our clothes off things aren't nice!!! :D it's just a suggestion. They're getting older.. Or are you going to do that on your 1000th sequel, where those tragic lovebirds meet at their 80s at Florida? 8)
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:33am
  • Tom Hiddleston

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    It is my story.. Muahaha. I always forget it's my story.. Silly billy..
    Happy ending.. Hmm.. We shall see >=)
    *Coughs*
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:17am
  • BombingwithBillieJoe

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    I love that Gerard ryhmes with retard bit. Made me laugh. YAY!!! Update more!! And, please for the love of god, don't give it a sad ending. I'm begging you. Though ultimately I realize it is your story, but still... I'd appreciate a happy ending :)

    Wait... you said sad news... sad news!! NO SAD NEWS!! Unless you meant only 5 chapters left being sad. I say... you make another sequal when this is done.
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:15am
  • Tom Hiddleston

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    It's on it's way =D
    With some very sad news =(
    November 23rd, 2007 at 03:04am
  • Sugartrout

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    ...and you better update that dancing scene today!!!! ;D I want some fluff and romantic-stimulation-dance-erm..-thing. :D
    November 23rd, 2007 at 02:58am
  • Tom Hiddleston

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    *Sighs* I love Gerard in a tuxedo. I'd do anything in a story.. Just to get him in a tux! Lol.
    Anyway. Chapter 30 time me thinks =D
    Im gonna update about.. 2/3 more chapters tonight.. =D I think.
    November 23rd, 2007 at 02:56am
  • Sugartrout

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    Awww!!!! That was so cute and I could hear angels sing hallelujah at thinking Gee in a black tuxedo thing.. :P *Dreamy eyes*
    November 23rd, 2007 at 02:54am
  • LookUpAtTheStars.

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    Omg i love this story :) god they should get together already .! its killing me reading it .! :) make a happy ending .!
    November 21st, 2007 at 11:13pm
  • Flower_of_chaos

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    Took me a while to understand what the hell was going on, i forgot Jo was getting married lol. Anyways, thanks for the update. :D
    November 21st, 2007 at 05:19pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    STAY! Naomi! STAY!
    Gerard needs you ! So bad :)
    Hahaha, I like the way this is going<3
    November 21st, 2007 at 03:24pm
  • Saint Gut-Free

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    SHE HAS TO CHOOSE TO STAY WITH GEE!!
    Please =]]
    They deserve to be happy (together) after all they've both been through.
    More!!
    This story kicks alot of ass.
    <33
    November 21st, 2007 at 03:00pm
  • Tom Hiddleston

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    No , no ,no , Nae stay....Oh yeah..isn't Gerard gonna be at Jojo's wedding...am I remembering correctly ? So he still has a chance to convince her / win her over...YAY. more soon =D
    You do remember correctly. Gerard is invited to the wedding =D
    November 21st, 2007 at 02:33pm
  • gk1406

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    aww, i hope she doesnt go to chicago and stays with gerard...or he could go with her :)
    November 21st, 2007 at 10:24am
  • Alice Verney

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    then stay in nj naomi
    November 21st, 2007 at 04:40am
  • just-a-lie

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    oh i hope they get together again, maybe Gee could go with her??
    amazing updates!!
    i need more!!
    November 21st, 2007 at 04:04am