April 30th, 2015 at 04:07am
So my friend said she read this story and told me to check it out and I read it all in one day. I couldn't stop reading it! And once I finished and went to comment on this I was astounded that you only had 23 subscribers!! This story was beyond amazing and you are such a talented writer!
Right from the beginning of the story I was hooked. The first chapter drew me in and I could just tell this story was going to be rad. I think what seperates this story from all of the others out there is it's so original! I have never read a story at all like this.
The way you described what they were feeling, Parker Martin and Paul especially, was increrdiable. I sometimes felt like those thinigs were actually happening to me because the way you described their thinking was so perfect that I could always connect with it.
I'm for sure going to read the sequel and check out your other work (:
-Emily <3
Also, sorry I found this so late. Better late than never, I suppose. I just really don't see much written about him, and so I jumped into as many stories as I could find lol.