Aww aww aww. This was so adorable and sweet. It was a really great idea, I don't know what made you write it or what gave you inspiration, but it's amazing. It's really different. :) The way you've described everything and made Alex the 'child' in the relationship is just fantastic. Really, really great job. :) ♥
This was amazing, I really liked it. I was so thankful that at the end at Zzz you didn't say something like Alex when to sleep and never woke up. something like that because I would have to kill you if you did :( I love this, one of my favorite one shots :)
Oh, I really love this. Everything about it is just gorgeous and cute and extremely well written. I could pick out all the things that I liked but it would be a complete waste of time to quote the whole thing so I'll just say that it was utterly flawless. I love Alex being the child of the relationship with a not so grown up Jack being the 'adult' sort of. I love the idea of this alot, really, really good job of making me go 'aww' and maybe want to cry a lil bit because it's just so gorgeous and they're so pretty. Sorry for rambling, -loves it intensely-