Just found this story and I really like it. The only thing that bothers me is that there is no way Frank and Gerard would not have already met. They met the girls on the same night, live in the same town and the wives are best friends. It would be absolutely impossible for them NOT to meet. Regardless, they know each other now. I loved Frank and Gerard's instant chemistry and I look forward to more updates.
Ah.. Thanks For Pointing It Out :) Sorry About That Off To Change It. Keep Reading It Will Get Interesting. Sorry Its Slow But I Don't Rush Plots I Like To Build Suspense.
hey loved this update just 1 thing tho in this paragraph: “Hey nice to meet you” I smiled as he took my hand and shook it. So soft... No! I had Jamia, I was straight and about to have a kid, what was wrong with me?
isn't it supposed to be No! I had Lyn, and I was straight and about to have a kid, what was wrong with me?
other than that i loves this update and the story!!!
So far I like it, it's a good plot line. I find Gerard somewhat adorable as the baby's daddy in this. lol. I'm going to subscribe to this, so there you have it. More soon?
I'll be honest. I think it's a cute idea but I'm not really sure I'm all that into it. Definitely continue though for those that wanna know what happens. :]
I'm really loving where this is headed. :)
xo ~Waking the Fallen.