I really dig where this story seems to be going ^-^
April 3rd, 2010 at 04:52pm
Sounds very interesting.
I'm subscribing
and just thought that I'd let you know that
a few of your paragraphs seem to be out of wack.
There's paragraph splits in the middle of sentences.
Just thought you would want to fix that =)
But I loved the chapter.
The last line really held my attention as to what would happen next.
