I like the story a lot, the idea seems great and could develop into something super amazing. Can't wait to read more, the only thing I find that the story lacks is a bit of description but that could be cause I'm used to reading obnoxiously descriptive novels. Keep up the great work :)
So i was thinking to myself "I wonder what he looks like when he gets all sexified." Then I see the banner thingy and I was all like *swoon... picks self up and squeals!* I lovers him. :) So I am going to stop scaring you with my awesome skills at random commenting and subscribe to this loverly story of yours. *smiles and waves bye*