Complicated Marriage - Comments

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wooooh! New chapter!!! Love this story soo much :)
write more por favorrr
<3 itt!

keep going i love it!!

love it :)

Oh and Brian can get lost. Zacky for the win!

Yay you updated. I hate to say it but sometimes I get irritated by her as she seems pretty selfish at times
She can't have everything in life
I hope the baby turns out okay and everything is fine!

loving this story update soon!!!!

love love love itt! Please update soon cause this story is amazing :D

love love love itt! Please update soon cause this story is amazing :D

Wow, this story is incredible. It's so different from anything else on here. Thanks for your originality.
I can't wait for the next update.

yay. Pregnancy. :]

It seems as if everything is going by too fast in this story. I'm starting to only find one cliche ending possible. The pregnancy came way early. I do not see a way for Brian to attempt to get invovled with Caroline.

love it!!! Yay she is pregnant!! though I feel we will not see the last of Brian trying to get with her

Awww :D
That was the oddest way to see if someone is pregnant but I hope it to be true.
I think Zack would make a fantastic father in this :) he seems to be more happy and open with her.
I'm happy for them both

Yeaaa hi.
Quick question: WHY THE FUCK HASN'T THIS BEEN UPDATED?
Now, don't take my choice in capitalization in a bad way. It's the only way to correctly display my enthusiasm about this story.
There is no story like this or at least I have come across it, which would be surprising. It's original, quirky and sensual. You write wonderfully and you have me hooked! I'm hoping that my upmost sincerity will cause some inspiration and a large update ;) I have to know more. I need to know more haha.
So please update?

YAYY!
She could be preggo.
Or not..
Please don't disappoint
me. D:
update soon?
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I love this story! I just started reading it because it was recommended and was so glad!

LOVE it! I'm glad Zacky is finally starting to be receptive to her. Haha, I find it absolutely adorable in a perverted way that he was reading books to figure out how to pleasure her. But they are so cute right now! I hope she's pregnant, but I'm thinking that would destroy the plot.

Because I'm all about the drama, I'm totally picturing her and Zacky ecstatic for a few days, and they have a lovely flirting moment like how she wanted at the beginning of this past chapter. Brian sees, gets pissed off, and decides to spread some rumour about how he slept with Caroline or something. Which would make people think the baby is his. And then shit would hit the fan. That's just how it's playing out in my head. Even though I really want Zacky and Caroline to be happy, they are definitely going to have to endure some drama. Not necessarily the one I just imagined, but she still has to deal with Zacky's OCD. THAT'S going to be a pretty crazy one there.

I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter! This story is so creative, and I"m sure it's difficult to get the narration voice and style of the era just right, so don't rush; masterpieces take time.

I like this very much :)

Whilst I am hoping her pregnancy is a result of her earlier sleeping with Zack,
I am enjoying Zack being much more reciprocative to her and kind. He was so sweet with how he's been reading up on how to pleasure her xD
I thought it absolutely adorable and then how he was so excited to see her in his study as well.
It's nice to know she thinks Zack's kisses are far better than Brians.
And I hope she is pregnant, Zack seems so happy about it.