It's a Band Thing - Comments

To be honest, I wasn't a big fan of this. While band seemed like it was supposed to be an enormous part of this (Hell, it was even in the title!), it didn't, which kind of threw me off. It was just that they were in band or they were performing, but other than what instrument they played, there were no real details there.

It also seemed that in a couple of parts, you would say something and go on, but later realize that you had to explain it. Normally, that's okay- I do it all the time. XD But it seemed to really disrupt the flow, and stuck out awkwardly.

You also might want to break up your paragraphs a bit more, to keep it from being too much like a wall of text.

Regardless, I can't wait to read the second part.

I loved it. I'm in band, so well I liked the fact that that was in the story. It was cute and it was the perfect length in my opinion. Awesome job.

this is awesome (: xD
I really like it and it's kinda cute xD
I hope things work out between you and 'shane' (:

don't worry...its gunna have a sequel, but both are only one chapter....

i love this keep it going
im a band kid too lol =)