July 14th, 2013 at 06:29pm
Awww this is so cute :) i love how you think they might not get back together but they do :)
i love how he thinks of the idea of getting a mock concert together to ask Sarah to marry him
your writing needs a little work but its still pretty good xD
i havent really listened to Mayday parade before but you tell the characters well
Thanks! Seeing as this story was written, months and months ago, before I really started to edit my work, I agree that my writing does need a lot more work in this case!
I appreciate the comment thank you so much!