Tree Top Children - Comments

I just read the first 2 chapters, and so far I really like this. The only thing thats bothering me is the grammar and stuff. I really want to keep reading this as it looks really good, and is from what I have so far read, but its taking me a while because of this. [/(hopefully slightly constructive) critisim]

I really like the idea, and I am going to contiune reading and I might even subscribe. :) its sweet and origional :)

thaankss :)) i knw, they're cutee

So bittersweet! Lovely xD in particular, I liked the last statement - "After that day Armon and Amelia became best friends.", because it was so simple and to the point. It was really, really nice.

please keep reading, new chapter comingg :D

yesssss

come on!!! write a new chapter!!!!!!!!! You'll write, right?

keep reading :D

yess i will, but i cant write everyday :)

C'mon!!!!!!!!
Add more!!!!!!

i will continue soon, right now im gonna start chapter 4 so be ready :)

thank you very much!

COME ON!!!!!!!!!! im ready for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i like this and i cant wait 4 more updates! =]

Love it!