Something Hidden: Witches Rising - Comments

That's so sad! It can't be done already! UPDATE THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

uh oh. He means trouble, I'm sure of it! But oh well, I like it. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

a date! Awesome! But I wonder if she'll say yes? And also... I have a feeling that Lucas is going to be a big part of the whole Evil thing... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

Of course she fainted. That's a shitload of power to have summoned for one night. And without any food breaks! Yeah. I like it veeerrrryyyy much. UPDATE!!!!! please

This is so great. That Lucas guy knows about them. I just have a feeling. He knows who they are and he's evil. Thats my prediction.

So awesome. This was just a great chapter.

Nice. The fourth witch, like the four elements! That's seriously awesome. I'm going to stop criticizing the random outbursts of fiction because I do realize (I finally realized, more like) that this is a fiction story. I know I know, FINALLY! Ah, stop it. You're making me blush. UPDATE!!!! please

Hi rhia god i read like the first chapter and half of the second and its brill. i will give you a pat on da bk tomorrow at school XD do you mind if i print i out at school tomoz i want to read it all XD

I loved it. It was very true, xcept about the pixies looks - their wings are more like moth wings, not very colorful; made for blending into the woods.

i loved this chapter. it was so great. such an excellent bed time chapter.

One word.......Awesome!

I love it!!! But, is it done? 'cuz there's like... a sequel up... Anyways, UPDATE!!! please

awesome update
that was the most intense one yet
i feel bad for morgan though, she'll be so left out
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

SWEETT!!!!! I loved the update hun, I can't believe they're related!!!! UPDATE!!!! pplease

great details :)

i really like this story, it's really cool. I think there should be some more witchy stuff, and maybe a bit more of williams ;) :P
UPDATE SOON :D

Love the update, hun! I really liked it, I'm glad Kota is a witch too! Oh, and most spells mostly work on longterm, you rarely get results that quickly, and besides, you still have to cast a mental circle. ;) Good luck with the whole witchy side, hun!!! UPDATE!!! please

i love the changes. seriously. i never usually admit this but Butterflysmile gave me the confidence to. i used to practice this stuff when i was younger. i actually made a chill spell work. really cool. but i just love this story and i love where its going and i cant wait to find out what happens past the point i already know!!!

I loved it! The whole ritual was realistic too, she just forgot to actually cast the circle, the elements don't snuff out themselves, and the Goddess only comes to you when you're in deep meditation, not just like that. Trust me, I've tried. But besides that, I love it! UPDATE!!! please

dude your amazing. nice work with detail.