Okay....so apparantly the ending sucked. I don't exactly know where to go from this point. I could re-write it. I was planning on doing a sequel....I already had the first chapter planned out. It was going to explain who the old woman was, about how Travis died, and some other important things that needed to be explained. I don't know about the sequel now....if poeple are unhappy then I apparantly didn't do a good job.
I felt a little unhappy at the end. Why was Travis's death brushed off like nothing? Who was the woman? And why did she help her? And the ending felt a little rushed.
I absoultely adore this story. although i feel like the ending was not your best. i think you could do a sequel or at least an epologue so we can see how happy they are together or something.
hi :) amazing story idea. i think maybe if you had thought the story out more and had more detail it could have been amazing, and the ending was a bit disapointing seeing as it cut off at such a major point of the story.