Saying Those Things - Comments

  • Crazysabby

    Crazysabby (100)

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    awwwwww :'( that's sad

    not the best way to say no :(

    but i guess it's a call for a lifestyle change eh?
    February 20th, 2010 at 07:31am
  • CourtneeSmyle

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    I like it.
    It's full of emotion and the twist at the end was amazing.
    There were a few punctuation errors, but no biggie.
    All in all though, it was a good story.
    Good luck^^
    February 10th, 2010 at 11:17pm