Can You Save Me in Time? - Comments

Yes I think I will do that. Probably will take this version down just because I really don't like it and I may or may not be following the same story line. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I do hope that you'll enjoy this newer version just as much if not more than.
I did reread it and I think it needs a lot of work pretty much everywhere but the ending especially. I really didn't want to add the whole baby thing into this book at all. I was hoping to save that until the next one, if I made a next one, but I guess it's all out now..I'll probably still do what I originally planned and those who read this already will have an idea of what's to come.

When you post the rewrite, are you going to post it as a new story?
I really like this story and you have great potential. I'm glad you're rewrting it because the last few chapters seemed rushed and didn't have the same content as tge beginning did

SHE LIVES!!!

Aww I hope she makes it as well as the baby

I thoguht her sister was on nyx side........
You made it seem like it

like its
i got two updates on this stories
but theres only one lol

yea
Kresh is so mean
I love Jinx
shes so sweet
and nice
but yet very
firece

Omg i lovee it!!
this is erika btw lol

okay after careful reading of your work Kristi , i think you need to obviously continue with your writings, as your many readers think you should as well, as which i am now one of, you have awesome potential, :) good luck and move on:)

really kick ass story
and kresh is ann ass hole!
cant wait for another update : ))
oh and i have a story to kinda reminds me of your just not as sad.
if you read it i would love some feedback.

Wow, I love your story!
I feel so bad for Jinx tho! I would never want to give up my sister!
Great writing, can't wait for more! = )

Okay in chapter two you had a little misspelled words. Other than that I really liked this story. I will look at the next chapter.

It was interesting to read. Um I noticed though you used the word revolution did you mean revulsion instead since the girl was disgusted. Just wondering. I enjoyed reading this.

it was great..as usual!

I like ur storie
Especailly the way ur chapters are long
keep up the long chapters
lol

coooooooontinue! :)

Yay! First commenter...woot woot. i like this story(: