First off, I want to say that I hardly found any Grammer or spelling errors. (: Second, I really liked this story. When it started talking about her sister, I literally almost started crying. I could feel the emotion. I felt that the story captured the picture really well. I think you did a really good job.
Second, I really liked this story. When it started talking about her sister, I literally almost started crying. I could feel the emotion. I felt that the story captured the picture really well. I think you did a really good job.