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Well...

That was one hell of a way to end it.

Everyone is fucking pregnant now, and I can't really blame Matt for being a little more than horrified. I would be too if I were him. That is a shitload of hormones to be dealing with at any given time. I almost feel bad for the guys, except really, they helped get themselves into that situation.

They should just be glad it took as long as it did for it to happen.

But I am really sad that its over now, so yeah...

Hurry up and get to work on that sequel...

I wanna knowww what happens!

Nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

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Well...

This one was cuute.

I was really amused at how scared Zack was to go to her uncle's house.

Made me laugh. A lot.

Seriously.

Clearly the way her parents behaved was unexpected though. They must have been super shitty before. Lol.

Anyways.

I loved it.

Update it.

Sooonly.

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This is awesome.

Hehe...

This one was pretty adorable. I mean, Brian and Eden were enough to make teeth rot, seriously. And then you add Zack and Avery to the mix, and just yeahh.

I loved how Jimmy pulled Zack off to the side to have a 'talk' with him. A talk which went exactly where no one was expecting it to.

Haha. Matt still isn't finding the humor in what me and Avery did to him? It's too bad, because it was fucking hilarious. I wish Zack would have thought to get pictures of the look on his face when I told him.

I'd have had them framed.

Also... if Brian fuckin' jinxes me with what he said... I'm kicking the shit out of him, just so we're clear.

*Grins*

But yeahh...

I loved it.

Update it soon.

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Hehe.

I loved these two chapters. I really did.

I still maintain what we did to Matt was kinda cruel.

Funny as shit for sure, but cruel nonetheless. Poor guy. I loved his reaction when he found out we were just fucking with him. He was just so unamused.

Gotta give him credit though... He took the joke rather well considering.

Lol.

Update it soon.

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Hehe I loved it.

Seriously, this one was awesome.

Jimmy and Leana made me laugh so much. I mean really, that was just cruel of her... I liked it. It made me giggle incessantly.

Me and Matt was pretty rad too. I loved how I was the take charge one while we were in the bar, and then as soon as we get back to the room he gets all dominating and smexyy.

That's my favorite Matt.

*Grins widely*

Also... the Zack and Avery bit was pretty adorable as well. I love how sweet he is to her. Makes me smilee.

Update it.

Soon.

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Yup.

They're all getting laid.

That is a fact.

Seriously though... I loved it. I really have missed the super fluff that this one entails, and I'm so glad that you're getting back to it. Lol.

Update.

Soon.

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So yeah...

This one is weird for me to comment because while the subject matter kinda really sucks, it was still a really good update. I mean, its just not okay to say I loved it when it mostly consists of telling everyone all the shitty things that happened to Avery in previous chapters, ya know?

I definitely didn't see JB and her sister getting something started though, so way to go there. I was actually pretty surprised by that one.

Update it.

Soon yeah?

Because I'm totally in the mood for some fluffy me and Matt scenes, and they're seriously lacking in this one right now. XD

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Uhhh.

Ignore the last comment as it was meant for Forever. :)

Great update.

Serious lack of Matt/Me fluff though.

I need some of that.

Though the fact that I saw him live last night will help me get over that for a bit at least.

XD

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Loved the update.

You know what else needs to be updated now?

Damaged. TAALS, APOHANP, KMH, Scream, and Fever.

Those are my top picks anyway. XD

Awwww Zacky vas cuuuteee in zis one!
adorablee!
And YAY no more nastyass Derek!
Update soonlyy :]

*Waves Goodbye to Derek*

See ya in the next life dude... only really, I hope I don't.

*Grins*

Seriously though.

I loved this one.

The end was mushy, and cuute.

Made me go 'Aww'.

And it really is about time fer this one. I was definitely starting to miss those 'Awww how cuute' moments, that's for damn sure.

Let's keep them coming, yeah?

Update.

Soon.

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Whoaaa! That was intense.
Like, really REALLY intense.
You'd best update soonly! I may get violent!

*Stares open mouthed*

What....

The...

Fuckin'...

Hell?!

Seriously... I mean... just... ughhhh. I liked the vomit-inducing fluff this story contained better. She better not get knocked up by that douche-fuck again. Otherwise? Heads will roll. *Nods*

Oh yes they will.

I want an update.

Soon.

Or I'm breakin' out the fuckin' chainsaw.

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Okayy.

Dude's a fuckin' creeper fer sure. You know that right? He needs to be locked up someplace for a good long time. And by that I pretty much mean for, like, forever. Forever sounds like a good amount of time. *Nods*

And poor Zack...

I mean, seriously... just... gah. Poor Zack.

Lol. Yes, I know I already said it... buut it's true.

He's getting screwed over because of something that has absolutely nothing to do with him and it's just not fair. *Shakes head*

Update it.

Soon.

Mmkay?

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*GLARES WITH JC*
THAT WAS EVIL!
EVIL!
EVIL!
FUCKING EVIL!
That ending was....GAH, UNACCEPTABLY EVIL!
UPDATE THIS NOW!!!!!

*GLARES*

What the fucking fuck was that, huh?

That ending was just... it was unacceptable. Period. The end.

Update this.

Soon.

Or chainsaws will be flying along with Lea's Sporks.

*Glares more*

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THAT CLIFFIE WAS EVIL!
IF YOU DONT UPDATE SOON THE SPORKS WILL FLY, I SWEAR!!

FINALLY! Matt's penis is in the right place.
Just sayinnnn.