:) really good so far. I wish Brian and Bella would get a happy ending lol. there always seems to be something stopping it but that's what makes it good. keep it up :D
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY I HELPED!!!! xD So what's goin' on? Drunk little sisters are very bad news. Maybe if you left off with that creepy breathing someone would have broken in. Stalkers? Burglars? Oh well. More stress to the pile. I hope there will be some less-tense, funny moments soon. Or just really big embarrassing moments- we need more of those.
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS!!
And Bella is a very bad mom and a TOTAL bitch. It doesn't matter what happens in your life, it's not an excuse to make other people's shit because of it.
hey. i love the story! brian can be such an arse sometimes lol. what a lazy one. haha. can't wait to see what Val wants? by the way, how old are the twins now?