Don't Forget Memory Lane - Comments

"But then his face turned pale and instantly sweaty and second later, he threw up in my lap.
How lovely."

Wow that line kind of stuck with me as it was the first line I read. Sorry bout that by the way. I have a strange way of reading books that makes my teachers freak out.

I noticed many grammatical errors especially around the dialog. If you spent even 5 minutes working on editing, it would make all of the difference.

aahh!! please update soon!!

This girl! Oh my god she has the nerve to say she kept my spot warm?! I was like oh hell no! Then she goes and calls Skye baby?! Okay yes you wrote this all out & are the mastermind behind the story but still, I don't like her.
I think it would be very interesting to have the next chapter in Skye's POV but yeah, that's only me & my thoughts.
Anyways! lovely update & I look forward to the next.
i hope everything is going well for you.

I've missed you! But now you're back so I'm happy :D This update was lovely, lovely lovely lovely, as always my darling.
I hope you know you don't need that ex of yours, you'll find love yet! xox

Since you can't hear me, I figure I might as well inform you I'm doing a fan-girl squeal right now (which, incidentally, i never, EVER do). I love this story! And I love how she's slowly peeling Skye's layers back. Also, the way that (unlike other stories that are the guy 'hates" the girl, but she likes him) he's trying his best to let/help her. This is an incredible story, and I especially love the way that the "populars" (or whatever you wish to call them) aren't the bimbo-Barbie-fake-slut-blonde-bitch type. :)

I can't remember if I commented on the last chapter of this...
If I did...ignore this!
If I didn't...sorry! It's so sweet how Memory and Skye are slowly getting closer =]
please update soon!

AHHHHH I GOT THE HUG =D I'm so excited.

Skye is adorable =')... I think I've told you that already... Many times.

Love this! Can't wait for the next one =) x

omyay an update.. and quite an amazing one at that:) she shoulda kissed him... what he did was adorable!!

AWWWW That was beyond adorable. I love this story a rediculous amount and the update was amazing.They're getting closer and that excites me :D xox

are you gonna update?? please i really wanna see where this goes:(

Ah finally caught up with this!
Damn, I love how Skye's starting to ease up around Memory.
And how protective he was over her at the party ^_^
more soon please!

Skye is actually the cutest thing ever =') bless his little cotton socks.
I love Serena too, she seems so lovely. I'm jealous of her not getting hangovers, I wish I could do that =/
I severely want something to happen between Memory and Skye... Even if it's a hug. I really want them to hug more than anything actually... I'm not quite sure why.

I love this update =) praying another one comes out soon!! =)

I LOVE YOU TOO! And lover, your stories are awesome too! Like seriously, I love this.
And I love how Skye finally seems to be opening up, even slightly. I can't wait for their relationship to grow! xox

*new reader* omg wow this story is amazing you should for sure write tons more:D

*its reli oringal. update it soon? (heheh sorry. its meant to be the same comment)

I like the idea!!

Love this :)

:)
love it!
more soon please

Gah that was such a good update! Loved that it was so long, so I could get my fix on Skye :]
Love Love Love xox

Ahh. Skye! More info!!
Love the story. =]