Green Day Express - Comments

Ok, so...
I have no ideas for stories, so, i might just update this one.
;]
I'm actually suprized people are still reading this, & it totally sucks.
:P
Well, just like keep looking for a update of some sort.

Hey guys... im just going to spill it.. i might NOT continue on this story..ive just lost my inspiration to it.. but on the good side, im making a new story that im confident about, so check it out!!!

=)

-Alyssa

yes thx u! ^_^ in my next chapter i am using more spaces, and i like it! i can even under stand wut im reading, and it's MY story! lol

it's good. Might wanna check your typing and wording. don't worry about it being short, it's cool. Hope you don't stop writing! =)

Its cool! i just think maybe you should paragraph it a lil better cuz its kinda confusing to read.
its a good story so far tho! =)

If ur interested, my story the freaky 5 has Billie Joe in it.

shank you every-one for commenting! and also thanks for the helpful tips. ^_^

Ok, I love what you've done with it! I can't wait to see what happens! I like that you had Billie Joe in there.

^ Thx for the tips! if you can see, i did start out with capitalizing, but stopped.. the reason why is cuz i got carried away with copying it to here from my diary. so ill start up again!

-Alyssa

This is pretty interesting so far, and even better that it has my favorite band in it!
To get more readers, you should capitolize and indent your paragraphs. Other than that, it's good.=D

Is it based on the Jesus of Suburbia music video? Like, when he leaves home?
It like it so far.

Well This Is Alyssa. and i guess what i don't like about my story is that my chapters are not that long, so i guess that means there's going to be lots of thinking, and typing. :3