April 13th, 2010 at 12:41pm
The Essence of Rain - Comments
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The whole stabbing thing was so unexpected. O.o I kinda like the story overallMarch 27th, 2010 at 09:09am
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That was a beautiful story. You have an amazing amount of talent. I have tears in my eyes right now. The ending was so unexpected.February 13th, 2010 at 12:04am
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From the CRAZY ASS STORY CONTEST!
Oh my god. As I'm writing this, tears are hitting the keyboard. That was probably the most beautiful thing I've ever read. =*)
I had NO idea the story was about Talon. I thought it was about Jake. And then when she got stabbed! It was so out of the blue! So unique. Extremely well written. (I'd like to say that only one other story has made me cry before. So well done. XD)
I really have no negative criticism about this at all... *ponders* Nope. Nada.
ALSO! Really liked the layout and the banner. <3 So talented!
Thank you for the entry and good luck! =DFebruary 11th, 2010 at 11:20pm -
That was an epic story. I literally have tears in my eyes... I absolutely adored it.
You have a real talent.February 11th, 2010 at 11:35am -
Awe thank you. I'm glad you liked it.February 11th, 2010 at 09:08am
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wow, that was one of the most beautiful stories I have yet read.February 11th, 2010 at 09:01am
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wow, that was one of the most beautiful stories I have yet read.February 11th, 2010 at 09:00am
You're a great writer.